Car underwater,
With plenty of time left,
Death circling nearer,
Awaiting the end of this mess,

What a serene view but,
Hurts to breathe water in,
The end of the line for this nut,
Most probably the catching up of my sins,

Is this how everything ends?
That I would die in a car underwater?
I have seen the end of all my plans,
Would anyone shed any tear?

Still I hold on ever so slightly,
Die! The suffocating air screams,
For it’s time to leave painfully,
You witness my end, with a grin.

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Author's Note: an acrostic. suffocating slowly in a car underwater. being found years later. somehow... a pretty interesting idea.

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Labels: Seasons of September

Kai-Teoh. Teoh Jun-Kai

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Drip,
From my slit wrist,
My life.

Drip,
From my sad eyes,
My dreams.

Flow,
Gone; my life.
Shattered; my dreams.